When....

[CR4Y]

WHEN

The first time I saw thou
I fell you'll be my friend
The second time I saw thou
I'm sure you'll be my good friend
The third time I saw thou
You and I are good friend
The fourth time I saw thou
We are best friend forever

Even we'll be far away,
We still will be best friend
Because

When one year not see thou
I fell you still will be my best friend
When two years not see thou
I'm sure you still will be my best friend
When third years not see thou
You and I are still best friend
When fourth years not see you
We are still best friend forever

No matter what it is
No matter what is gonna happen
You are my best friend
Forever.....

CR4Y, 05-22-2006

TIDAK BOLEH MENGCOPY, HARUS ADA PERSETUJUAN DARI SAYA

Ray

 

[cuwonomon]

Mastah, cool

 

[mas6]

Master Cr4y
Copy yah
Bwat skull >.<
Bagus banged!!

 

[CR4Y]

@mas6: kalau mau copy harap sertakan namaku kalau ga awas!!!!!
Yang mau copy silakan saja tapi sertakan namaku!!!! Tolong jangan suka copy kepunyaan orang tanpa tahu siapa pembuatnya!!!!!

Ray

 

[Harushame Yusuke]

wew.
galak amat

kalau copynya diam2 gimana??
(bukan maksud gw mau ngopi)

 

[nisa81]

heheheh.....kalo ngopy ga ada nama org pembuat/sumbernya, itu sama aja dgn PLAGIAT!
Btw, nice poem!!

 

[dede23]

wakzzzzzzzzz keren bangetttttttttttttt
cocok neh buat ttm an wa hahahha....
btw itu kok thou bukan you?
salah tulis gak?

 

[nisa81]

@dede23
setau gw itu ga salah tulis....emang kata lazim yg lebih kita kenal adl "you"....
Tp pengertian "thou" itu s'benernya sama aja. Tapi kalo kata "thou" emang lebih biasa dipake utk poetry, karya shakespeare, etc.... Jd kedengerannya lebih klasik.... (maaf nih kalo salah)....

 

[dede23]

o gitu.. wa kira salah nulis hehehe
tp keren puisina

 

[dede23]

duh bner2 bagus...
cocok neh...
wa baru ja pisah ma tmen2
wa kirimin atu2

 

[phiter_151]

seep 4 make friendship/no1

 

[bonkeru]

gla bgz tuh..

 

[thekiting]

wah bagus banget puisimu ntr aku copy trus aku pakai untuk memikat wanita2.hehehe