Waiting for you

[Rokyuju]

Suddenly the world seems such a perfect place
Suddenly the moon feel so beautiful to see
Suddenly everything changed when I saw you
The world are feel so comfort to live

Before I saw You
I Never knew I will feel like this
No matter how hard this live
I always feel glad to being alive with you

I promise to give you everything
Every thing you want
No mater how hard I try
I never could reach you

I always wait the winter changed to spring
No matter how long the spring will come
But you never let the door at your heart open
The door that I can't go through

The thing I can do now
Is waiting here in the front of your door
So when you need me
You will always find me

Never tired waiting for you
Always hope you open the door
I'm here waiting for you
Wait till my dying day

 

[reza_neutrond]

ih thx yah, poetry nya keren banget
gw mau kasih nih poetry ke orang yang gw suka
thanks banget

 

[v0LtaGe]

Nice poem!

Kenapa ga coba buat lagu ajah? Dari segi lirik udah oke banget ituh..

 

[Jhoe_d]

gw mulai sukanya dr bagian ini
"I always wait the winter changed to spring...bla...bla...

yg atas2 aga biasa...sory just try to say somthin /no1

 

[Rokyuju]

gw mulai sukanya dr bagian ini
"I always wait the winter changed to spring...bla...bla...

yg atas2 aga biasa...sory just try to say somthin /no1

Lagi pula puisi ini ga pernah gw kasih ke orang yang gw tuju karena gw dah ga berniat ngejer lagi setelah sabar selama 7 tahun.

Gpp kok diterima saranya. beberapa kata itu gw kutip dari lagu "Come What May" ost Moulin Rouge.
ini liriknya

Never knew I could feel like this
Like I’ve never seen the sky before
I want to vanish inside your kiss
Every day I’m loving you more and more
Listen to my heart, can you hear it sings
Telling me to give you everything
Seasons may change, winter to spring
But I love you until the end of time

Come what may
Come what may
I will love you until my dying day

Suddenly the world seems such a perfect place
Suddenly it moves with such a perfect grace
Suddenly my life doesn’t seem such a waste
It all revolves around you
And there’s no mountain too high
No river too wide
Sing out this song I’ll be there by your side
Storm clouds may gather
And stars may collide
But I love you until the end of time

Come what may
Come what may
I will love you until my dying day

Oh, come what may, come what may
I will love you, I will love you
Suddenly the world seems such a perfect place

Come what may
Come what may
I will love you until my dying day

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