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Poem> The Broken Heart

seththeeagle

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I want to share you my story i made, please give me comments ^^ Ini buat Ex-Gf gw orang Bule hihihi

a thousand miles i dragged my feet just to kneel down infront of you and say that i love you sweetie..
I fell many times but i don't care as long as i see your face
i can't stand another day without you
without your feelings with me
inside, i cried of your name, coz your not with me

I know i will never read your love again
but before i go, if you could see me now
i hope you know how hard for me to tell u that i love u
How HArd for me to see you walked away from me
Eventhough i have to cross 10 miles of fire, i will do it for you

I cried hopelessly here, baby.
as now, i will leave u forever coz i know i will never breathe you love again
baby, i will never breathe you love...again...

Goodbye my dear, i hope you find a better one
 
Wrong room... /swt

Mod please move diz thread..

For my comment yah..
Mmm...
There r still some grammatical errors,but no prob,poems rarely concern bout that.. hehehe...
 
it;s good... just share what you want to share

not share is nothing
 
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