kk please help me...

[nl_t4n]

i need your help all
i wanna to translate sentences but i'm affraid i'm wrong in my translation..

this is:
resigning to staying away from now on
i won't be pretty if no effort is put in
think about the romantic times we once had
can we stop for a while to secord those times down



thx b4

 

[v0LtaGe]

Let me try, ok?
Is it a poem?

resigning to staying away from now on
menyerah untuk menjauh dari sekarang
i won't be pretty if no effort is put in
karena tanpa usaha tak kan ada keindahan
think about the romantic times we once had
renungkan saat-saat kita berdua dulu
can we stop for a while to record those times down
andai kita bisa berhenti tuk merekam waktu

I give a little modification so it would be a nice poem
/heh

 

[~Blitz~]

resigning to staying away from now on
Mundur untuk menjauh (darimu) sejak saat ini. /wah

i won't be pretty if no effort is put in
Akan kurang baik jika tidak disertai dengan usaha. /no1

think about the romantic times we once had
Pikirkanlah tentang masa² indah yg pernah kita lalui bersama. /sob

can we stop for a while to record those times down
Dapatkah kita berhenti sejenak untuk mengenang masa² itu? /?


Kira² begitu

 

[irtapace]

nice but i can't /sry