help me!!!!!!!!!!!

[nl_t4n]

cc or kk, please ya . help to correct my grammar because i'm still amateur in english. so, please ya! thank's b4.


Selamat Datang…Welcome…Huãnyíng Guãnglín…Yõkoso…Hwangyong-hamnida!

Whereever you are, whatever you think
Nice to meet you, eventhought with this blog

This life is a big mistery
Sometimes, I can’t understand whatever that will happened to me
There are many kind, like a puzzle
You’ve imagined a plan, but usually it didn’t work like you want

When you’ve problem, big problem
As a human, It’s normally that you said that God didn’t have a justice to you
It’s a humanity
Even our beloved person was die…
it’s real
and time never come back to the past
the only place they can live is in our memory
it’s hurt but it’s the fact

In other hand, God have a justice
You may be have given a grace from own believed God
It’s a lesson of life, that helping us to be a person, to be you’re supposed to be




Finally, life must go on and on .
Cia you……

 

[loki almighty]

Here's is my revised version of your post

cc or kk, please help me to correct my grammar because i'm still an amateur in english. so, please!

thank's in advance.


Selamat Datang…Welcome…Huãnyíng Guãnglín…Yõkoso…Hwangyong-hamnida!

Where ever you are, whatever you think
Nice to meet you, eventhough with this blog < maksudnya apa ?

This life is a big mistery
Sometimes, I can’t understand whatever that will happen to me
There are many kind of things , like a puzzle
You’ve imagined a plan, but usually it didn’t work like the way you want

When you’ve a problem, big problem...
As a human, It’s normally that you felt that God didn’t have justice on you
It’s only human to thing that way
Even when our beloved person was dead…
it’s real < gak ngerti lagi maksudnya apa ?
and time will never turn back to the past
the only place they can live is in our memory
it will hurt but it’s the fact

In other hand, God have a justice
You may be have been given grace from Heaven
It’s a lesson in life, that helps us to be a person, to be what you’re supposed to be




Finally, life must go on and on .
Jia you……

 

[Hazuki]

Selamat Datang…Welcome…Huãnyíng Guãnglín…Yõkoso…Hwangyong-hamnida!

Wherever you are, whatever you are thinking
Nice to meet you, eventhough only with this blog

This life is a big mistery
Sometimes, I can’t understand whatever that will happen to me
There are many kinds of things happening, life islike a puzzle
You’ve imagined a plan, but usually it didn’t work like the way you have planned

When you have aproblem, a big problem
As a human, It’s normal if you said that God doesn't give justice to you
It’s a humanly feeling
Even if our beloved person had died...
this is the real life
and time couldn't be turned back
the only place they would live is in our memory
it hurts, but it is the fact

In other hand, God is equal
You may have been given a grace from your own God that you believe
It’s a lesson of life, that helps us to be a person, to be who you’re supposed to be






Finally, life keeps on going on and on .
Cia you……

smoga ga salah" >.<

 

[Jessica]

Wherever you are, whatever you think
Nice to meet you, even though just with this blog

This life is a big mystery
Sometimes, i can't understand anything that will happen to me
There are many kind of things, like a puzzle
You've imagined a plan, it didn't work like you've expected before

When you've got a problem, a big problem
As a human, it's normal when you say that God doesn't give the justice to you
It's a human being
Even if our beloved person had died
It's real <--- sorry i just don't get it
and time would never turn back
the only place where they could live is in our memories
it hurts but it's the fact

In other hand, God has the justice
You may have been given the grace from your own God that you believed in
It's the lesson of life, that helps us to be a person that you're supposed to be



Finally, life goes on and on
Jia you...






actually, I apologize if there is a mistake or maybe some mistakes but i just tried to help...

just keep going !!! /no1
/go /go /go