belajaran nih, jadi sory kalo salah...

[h4nz]

OXYGEN ( I Miss You )

I miss you like oxygen
Trapped in a space without the atmosphere
Of your voice
Without the gentle winds of your touch
Without the sun setting sparkle in your eyes
Before a smile

I miss you like water
Stranded a million miles into the dunes
Of other ignorance and apathy

I miss you like lily seeds
Waiting to blossom in the warm of spring
Like a bird unheard
One who has lost the will to sing

I miss you like gravity
As the moon to the tides
Like a raindrops birth
Falling to the earth


A worth to great

For simple minds to recognize

I miss you like justice
I miss you like sweet relief
I miss you like a comfort place
I miss you like water

 

[chesster]

ini puisi yah??....

kok kayak gimana gitu...

 

[LoVe_ChiKa]

Bagus ko.... jangan mudah putus asa....
namanya juga belajar... dan akan semakin berkembang klo rajin berlatih...

Dan sku salut ko.... suatu kebanggaan tersendiri berani menunjukkan hasil karya sendiri di depan org banyak gini.... ... keep post bro.../no1

 

[chesster]

yah jangan termakan kata-kata si diamond, di punya pendapatnya sendiri...

keberanianmu patut di acungi jempol...

 

[gendel32]

Wach keren bgt,,
cuman satu aja yang ane gak suka dari dulu
tolong dong di indonesiakan saja , biar ane lebih doooong

 

[Ik3uChi_4y4]

wah bagus banget puisinya nih.../no1

@ kk gendel
klo pengen bahasa indonya harus yg buat tu yg mengindonesiakan sendiri yaitu TSnya.
Soalnya poetry berbahasa inggris kadang2 kita sebagai reader menangkap artinya berbeda2 loh