Need help to translate into english

[arianing]

terima kasih..barang kiriman Anda telah saya terima..
tapi saya ada ketidakpuasan setelah menerima barang Anda..karena ada beberapa barang Anda yang rusak...misalnya mesin jam tangan terlepas dari tempatnya, tali jam terputus. kerusakan itu jumlahnya banyak..

mohon ditanggapi dan dipertanggungjawabkan....

 

[Gray]

dear ___

thank you, I already received the goods. But I'm a bit unsatisfied as some goods are bad in condition. For example: many watch machines apart from the watch and many watch ropes are also apart from the watch.

I'm waiting for your response to solve this problem.

(ga biasa nulis English formal nih, kalo ada salah mohon koreksi hehe trus biasanya pake kata dear ditambah nama yang dituju. Di atas cuman wa kasih garis bawah doang soalnya ga tau nama yang dituju siapa)

 

[loki almighty]

dear ___

thank you, I already received the goods. But I'm a bit unsatisfied as some goods are bad in condition. For example: (some parts of the watch fell off) and (the strap is broken as well).

I'm waiting for your response to solve this problem.

(ga biasa nulis English formal nih, kalo ada salah mohon koreksi hehe trus biasanya pake kata dear ditambah nama yang dituju. Di atas cuman wa kasih garis bawah doang soalnya ga tau nama yang dituju siapa)

correction from me...

 

[Gray]

that's it, a bit sleepy during wrote the translation, thanks indeed

 

[loki almighty]

that's it, a bit sleepy during wrote the translation, thanks indeed

well this one is gramatically wrong as well... so i suggest you get a cup of coffee and start refreshing your english skills

 

[Kenji]

during writing the translation maybe ?

 

[MetalicMilanista]

yeah y'all, can't use a broken wrench to fix a broken pipe .

 

[andre2027]

dear sir/madam

I gave u my thanks,coz i've received u'r package today
but after check on it.i found some trouble with the item i ordered from u.
like: - the machine parts always fell of when i try it on,apparently wasn't locked in the correct position and the leather almost torn apart

i found the defect not from a single item....almost all of it are defect..

kindly, i'm waiting for your response how to solve this matter

best regards,