Event Make a Story

well this thread only to test the event make a story

Wat to test?? Grammars?? Themes?? Stories??

@all

all can you help /? /?

i have 1 request can you creat 1 story about city jakarta i very confiused about it i neefd your help and correct Grammars /thx before that

I want to make this event work again ,
so this is the rules,

each member only can write 5 words which should combine with next participant with other 5 words,

like this

Member 1 : There is a boy name
Member 2 Wrote: There is a boy name Thomas who can't sing because
Member 3 Wrote: There is a boy name Thomas who can't sing because he keeps crying if he

so how if we getting started now


I'm first

I hate cockroach it is

I hate cokroach,it is very nasty that

I hate cokroach,it is very nasty that makes me feel awful so

I hate cokroach,it is very nasty that makes me feel awful so i put some insecticide in

I hate cokroach,it is very nasty that makes me feel awful so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died.











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pls enter only five words

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung,

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak with swimming. I have swim for 1000 mil..

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak with swimming. I have swim for 1000 mil.. N I arrive in Pontianak, Sungai Kapuas exactly

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak with swimming. I have swim for 1000 mil.. N I arrive in Pontianak, Sungai Kapuas exactly i found a lot "Float Gold" + Annoying Smell...

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak with swimming. I have swim for 1000 mil.. N I arrive in Pontianak, Sungai Kapuas exactly i found a lot "Float Gold" + Annoying Smell... N I know it.. It's a shit... N I swim n swim again until

i hate cockcroach, it is very nasty that makes me feel awful, so i put some insecticide in my brother's room but unfortunately he ate it then died. But when he's at hospital, he survived and awake again,suddenly I'm startled and began to run towards to my home at Jakarta From bandung, but in Jakarta there's a lot of zombie n I ran to Pontianak with swimming. I have swim for 1000 mil.. N I arrive in Pontianak, Sungai Kapuas exactly i found a lot "Float Gold" + Annoying Smell... N I know it.. It's a shit... N I swim n swim again until i don't have anymore energy....